Ow. Damn. I almost wish you'd left this in a less effective form. It got under my skin deep and fast with the emotional abuse, then yanked hard with the ending. It's arguably too good.
Also, I just now remembered that the Once And Future Protagonist was named Megan. It has been too damn long since the focus shifted away from her and you went on hiatus.
But I don't mean to gripe. It's great to have you back and past this hurdle. I'm going to have to find the time to go back and reread everything and get re-invested.
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Date: 2013-08-25 09:48 am (UTC)Also, I just now remembered that the Once And Future Protagonist was named Megan. It has been too damn long since the focus shifted away from her and you went on hiatus.
But I don't mean to gripe. It's great to have you back and past this hurdle. I'm going to have to find the time to go back and reread everything and get re-invested.